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Death of a Soul

Contributed by Essentially9 on Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 10:44:13 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Death of a Soul

Thank you for your time
And all of the kindness
You've made me different
World's portrayed in a new light
My inner glow now shines

Through all my life
I've been believing lies
Not knowing what was truth
And staying on the sidelines
Wondering if it was worth it
Just to be killing myself
One day at a time

The death of a soul
Is worse than ever known
Nothing can compare
To the loss felt

That loss I took
Believing I was worthless
That life was pointless
That my life meant nothing
No matter what I did
To change it
I was never able to move on
From the past
And because of that
I still pay the price

Thank you for my life
For making me see the light
The light I cannot deny
Like I did the darkness all this time




Copyright © Essentially9 ... [ 2004-09-04 22:44:13]
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Re: Death of a Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Bruce on Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 10:54:57 PM AEST
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more than beautiful and i have chills from reading it and hope and pray that you are now on the right track and will live, love and enjoy your future life. XXXX


Re: Death of a Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by AnastasiaN on Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 11:32:48 PM AEST
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this is an awesome write and thanks for telling me about it. keep on trying and you'll always live in the light!


Re: Death of a Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Pyrofungus on Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 12:00:08 AM AEST
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There's always those few people out there in the world that are set aside just for you to make you believe in yourself and help you out when you need it the most...or maybe not when you need it the most, but when they are supposed to make you see what's really going on...see more clearly....

Great Write
Summer


Re: Death of a Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by nexxa on Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 12:17:25 AM AEST
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Very nice wee one and I am glad I popped back by to catch this. I can only hope that thru just a little bit of kindness I can make a difference and that I strive for everyday! You my dear make those differences everyday, that is what I like about you. You call this a dedication and I call it a dedication to yourself.
Keep up the work wee one and someday I am gonna see your name in the book I am reading.
Nexxa


Re: Death of a Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 12:32:30 AM AEST
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believing i was worthless......your words are priceless......what an amazing talent you have....


Re: Death of a Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 04:27:07 AM AEST
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awesome


Re: Death of a Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by thumper on Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 09:07:56 AM AEST
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"I was never able to move on
From the past
And because of that
I still pay the price"
Understood completely.
Great write. Write on Ess 9!
Thumps ; 0)


Re: Death of a Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 11:30:52 AM AEST
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Oh this touched my heart so much. It was honest, meaningful and the edges of pain gave it just the right feel.

With clarity I have realized recently how mortal we all are. Please don't waste your life. Live it.

LOved your poem.

Kie


Re: Death of a Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by savedbydeath on Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 07:44:17 PM AEST
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aww u made me cry!wow what a great poem,i'm happy u see what u should have been seeing the hole time,its such a shame u didnt se it before,ur such a nice,sweethearted person,i'm also glad all them private messages u and i do back and forth got ya some where,but i still dont know y u wanna know about censor so much,anyways such a well done poem keep up the good work and kep up listening to those who care about ya...later sexy baby,LOL


savedbydeath

u know who dis is LOL


Re: Death of a Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 01:35:17 PM AEST
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You deserve to begin to be happy..I loved this one..

AfterDark..


Re: Death of a Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by cheech on Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 03:29:20 PM AEST
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SWEET POEM!!!! i was told that this was dedicated to me and a few others out there,well u know something it made me cry to actually know just how much 1 actually does listen to me,so i wanna thank u sooo much for taking the time and the consideration to listen to me and all those other ppl,i also want u to know that i'm always here if u wanna talk about something u and i r the same age so we'd have alot to talk about and we can help eachother out,later...keep up the good listening and poems

cheech


Re: Death of a Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by tears_of_blood on Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 09:21:46 PM AEST
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your so good at wrting your poems i wish you the best and i cant wait to read more


Re: Death of a Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by veenu on Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 01:12:28 AM AEST
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nice job........................
god bless u
naveen....................veenu




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