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without you
Contributed by
monophobic
on
Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 09:25:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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these chemicals have gotten the best of me
that was the plan so i could forget you
now i realize all i lost was myself
and now this depression is more then i can really take
for just one more night i need you to love me again
cause it hurts when i don't see you but even worse when i do
because thats when we don't talk when we really should
and i want you to know that i'm going to be okay
it just kills me to know that you won't be there
and i hate knowing someone else is gonna be there for you
because i really do want to be there for you
because the world doesn't seem like the same place
when you and me aren't together
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2004-09-04 21:25:01]
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Re: without you
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 09:55:26 PM AEST
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| heart wrenching. well being idealistic doesnt really help. moving on would be the best thing to do, there is always something better out there after all. |
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Re: without you
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by bite_me on
Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 10:47:48 PM AEST
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Aaaww, thats rly good, yeah it is heart renching, very well writtin though, hope ur ok.
Ella
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Re: without you
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by Jenn2004 on
Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 12:13:49 AM AEST
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| I hate breakups and being heartbroken, i think its the worse thing to go through i think. It was a good write. |
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Re: without you
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by AndTheFoolShallBurn on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 10:49:54 PM AEST
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| That's the moment I'm caught in as we speak... |
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