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Broken Angel
Contributed by
jaeann
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Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 06:13:14 PM in AEST
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I feel like a broken angel
falling from the sky
floating in a sea of azure
trying not to cry.
I feel like I have a broken wing
unable to really fly
lost and always searching
always saying goodbye.
I feel like I'm in some broken land
asking no one why
never quite touching down
just waiting here to die.
I feel like a broken angel
trying to find her high
every time you go away
the tears begin with a sigh.
Copyright ©
jaeann
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2004-09-04 18:13:14]
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Re: Broken Angel
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by tears_of_blood on
Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 06:43:51 PM AEST
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that was a good poem it has alot of meaning to it good work
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Re: Broken Angel
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 07:19:31 PM AEST
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| awesome, good work |
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Re: Broken Angel
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by luckycharm on
Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 08:09:38 PM AEST
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| Hi jaeann, I really liked your poem. Your poem has a flow in it and I love how you rhymed in the poem as well. You have a unique style of writing, so keep the poems coming okay.-luckycharm. |
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Re: Broken Angel
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 09:13:12 PM AEST
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| excellent write thats again full of emotion. this kind of reminds me of the one i wrote, thy fallen angel. i rather like yours much better though =] |
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Re: Broken Angel
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by venkat on
Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 05:05:25 AM AEST
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| wellexpressed. venkat |
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Re: Broken Angel
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 08:40:08 AM AEST
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Beautiful.....we seem to be having the same feelings of late.
Very well written once again
Roses
Larry |
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Re: Broken Angel
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 05:56:26 PM AEST
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this is tuely beautiful, jaeann, great choice of words, as always, and that tear, that sigh, excellent poem:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Broken Angel
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 12:22:55 AM AEST
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Oh Jaymee...........this is so sad, a broken angel...beautifully said, with much emotion, but I'm sad that you are sad!!!
Wish I could cheer you up!
Love and hugs
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