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Thoughts
Contributed by
tears_of_blood
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Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 01:19:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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As I sit here and start to think
how it all use to be
so sweet and so beautiful
the way we kissed
the looks we shared
the dreams we had for us
those nights when we couldn't be apart
the feeling I got from knowing you where always there
this is just some of the stuff I think about then your not here
now there gone I took them away in one night
I took everything that made you happy I just throw it away
now all you have is this pain
a pain no one should ever have to have
it made me think what I need to do
I have to change
change the way I am and how I treat people
no more hurt no more pain
I hate to see you cry
I say no more for this day well I make a tear fall from the sweet sweet face
maybe after all that I can see you again one day.
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2004-09-04 13:19:58]
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Re: Thoughts
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by Pyrofungus on
Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 01:31:29 PM AEST
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Man I'm goin through the same thing...i'm going to slowly change how i treat people and act...I lost the guy I love over me thinking to much and letting people and things get to me...now all I can think of is what I did wrong...and the happiness I once had with him....
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Re: Thoughts
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 01:34:52 PM AEST
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It's tough to change, but the first step is realizing we need to.
A well expressed write
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Re: Thoughts
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by wild_girl121 on
Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 05:19:36 PM AEST
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hey i just wanted to correct you by say that it should be " when" your not there instead of " then "
angie |
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Re: Thoughts
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by AnastasiaN on
Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 07:57:13 PM AEST
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| hey bradley i really liked this poem and i hope that it comes from your heart...and i look forward to some day too...and for other perfectionists...you don't have to correct the grammar in a poem because if you truly read it you could understand the words without being correct...just a thought |
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