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Too long
Contributed by
XxNights_ChildxX
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Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 12:32:10 PM in AEST
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Too long I have been struggling, just to stay alive,
but no more shall I, Im taking control of my life,
Too long have I lacked to feel the warm sun upon my face,
I was trapped in a darkness, somewhere out in space,
Too long have I ignored, the positive choices all around,
I kept choosing the negatives and putting myself down,
Too long I have forgotten what it really means to live,
I didn't know how much happiness I could recieve and give,
Too long have I hidden deep within this small dark shell,
I kept ignoring paridise, instead living in this hell,
Too long have I swayed away from the colours that I've lacked,
only seeing my depressing world in shades of white and black,
Too long have I sat here slowly but surely dying,
Now that Im back on track, life is sure worth trying.
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Re: Too long
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by Pyrofungus on
Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 01:35:02 PM AEST
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Yup I'm realizing all that stuff too, but i'm just hiding all of my negative ***** and sadness deep inside of me....i'm learning control....I think I'm doing pretty good! great poem!
please comment on my work too
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Re: Too long
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by markie on
Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 02:33:46 PM AEST
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| Great discription of depression..I wrote a poem about it being like in a dark hole..you keep trying to get out only to slide back..then you get used to the darkness and decide to just stay there...I don't remember if I posted it or not...anyway, great poem. |
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Re: Too long
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 10:08:10 PM AEST
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| amazing write. i wish i could feel this. |
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