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My Love
Contributed by
pyrofungus
on
Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 11:40:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Blessed by a love
One that is of two doves
Sensitive to the touch
A feeling so wild
Yet tender from the heart
Eyes of chocolate
Small and cute
Little hands of masculinity
With minds of their own
A mind filled with thoughts
Too many questions go unanswered
Mistakes from the past
Unresolved
A future in question
That is to be...
Of love
Of hate
With understanding...
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pyrofungus
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2004-09-04 11:40:56] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: My Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by corrupted_minds on
Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 03:35:53 PM AEST (User
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So many feelings I have felt before. Keep it up.
love always
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Re: My Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by Wachumiri on
Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 05:23:03 PM AEST (User
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Very well put. You describe well what love puts one through.
May love find you once again and stay a bit longer.
Take care.
David |
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Re: My Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by Overstated on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 12:48:03 PM AEST (User
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oh i love this so much - great effort |
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