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Just a Dream
Contributed by
critterhideaway
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Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 09:15:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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As I lie and sleep I feel you here with not a space between us. A gentle nudge, a soft touch, to feel the warmth between us. I turn to you in the dark of night, our bodies now entwine .I touch your face and taste your lips so sweet. Gently now I feel your body soft and strong as we join in loves' embrace. I hold you close, and give to you my love in absolute submission. Our passion soars to take us into the clouds so high. A moment of bliss, a gentle kiss. Only love can feel like this. I wake! and look to my side and see, well this was only a lovely dream. There is no one there , nobody here. I sleep again as if to dream of a love like this to come to me. A love so gentle, loves' sweet bliss started with a gentle kiss.
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Re: Just a Dream
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by Lionel on
Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 09:26:54 AM AEST
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Whew - It's kinda warm in here - turn the air down honey.
What are you reading on that computer, Lionel?
Quickly, I return to: "Full Poetry List" |
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Re: Just a Dream
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by AspenGlow on
Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 11:38:05 AM AEST
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Life is but a dream, and dreams.......very beautiful verse.
Thank you for sharing, this is a wonderful poem.
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Re: Just a Dream
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by emystar on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 10:55:15 PM AEST
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Beautifull dream.
Gret writing.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Just a Dream
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by Pyrofungus on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 07:08:21 PM AEST
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aww this is so nice! reminds me so much of me and my ex...
please comment on my work too
summer |
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Re: Just a Dream
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 02:15:34 PM AEST
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This is just lovely. Never stop dreaming, if you do or any of us do.....we will surely die
hugs,
consue |
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Re: Just a Dream
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 10:24:01 PM AEST
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Ahh.how very serene..... some dreams do come true....so hold them close to your heart..and never stop dreaming..
Jenni |
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Re: Just a Dream
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by bethb02 on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 12:38:13 AM AEST
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lol great poem
I know the feeling |
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