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troys life in a nutshell

Contributed by kritic_killer on Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 09:08:26 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

troys been here, troys been there, but do you think anyone would care?
troy is too much to handle, should be framed and put on the mantle
he is a piece of work, that one, a work that is needed by no one
his life was a mess, his only success- making people laugh... at him, how smart.
falure after falure, year after year, he decided theres no future for him anywhere
left all he held dear behind, in a small town that lived off a mine.
to a city of great expectations, and low elevation
yes, this city was near the sea, which has always been a dream for he.
wanting to live near there, just wanting to stare
at the great vast, blue miracale- quite a specticale.
he found his first love here... but she wouldnt be his last, or true, or most dear
this person smashed his heart, quicker than an ants march.
he decided to give the small town another go, what will happen there? he didnt know
amazingly he feel for another. the love for her is so much stronger
he knows she will never hurt him... not on pourpose... not for no reason
I LOVE YOU CHRISTIE.

Copyright © kritic_killer ... [ 2004-09-04 09:08:26]
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Re: troys life in a nutshell (User Rating: 1 )
by Lionel on Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 09:32:47 AM AEST
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Killer, this is just excellent. You're a talented writer. EXCELLENT

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