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Have you Ever?
Contributed by
The_Phantom
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Wednesday, 17th July 2002 @ 08:13:01 PM in AEST
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Have you ever got lost in someones eyes,
Have you ever made love so sweet you cried,
Have you ever felt two souls combind,
Have you ever just lost your mind,
A kiss as fresh as the morning dew,
A touch as soft as a velet room,
Two hearts beat as one,
A passion as hot as the sun,
Slik sheets covered in sweat,
A soul reborn the day we met,
A quite sky of blue,
Holding you close as we wish upon the moon,
Feeling the desire burn deep inside,
Building so fast I'm almost blind,
You've reach deep into my soul,
What the night has in store in unknown,
You are God sent, I have been blessed,
My whole being is softly caressed,
Have you ever been so in love,
You swear you've kissed an angel from above.
Forever Faithful
The Phantom
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Re: Have you Ever?
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by lil_hummingbird on
Wednesday, 17th July 2002 @ 11:09:08 PM AEST
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| very well done! great write! |
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Re: Have you Ever?
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by chatabox on
Sunday, 21st July 2002 @ 09:13:03 PM AEST
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| yes I have felt like this and you expressed it so beautifully too. It was just lovely. |
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Re: Have you Ever?
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by The_Phantom on
Monday, 5th August 2002 @ 09:11:28 PM AEST
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Thankyou for your comments I'd hoped this poem would reach out to others. It means alot to me.
Forever Faithful
The Phantom |
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Re: Have you Ever?
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 27th January 2003 @ 09:57:48 PM AEST
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| Awwwww! How Sweet!! I love this... you two are so talented and beautifully express yourselves, I'm a fan @-<<- my best to you and yours and smiles and beauty always huggs Nessa |
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Re: Have you Ever?
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by PhantomsBBYgrl on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 10:45:22 PM AEST
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| this is a really awsome poem! |
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Re: Have you Ever?
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by Bizzy on
Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 03:22:21 PM AEST
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| Very beautiful, Phantom! May you be safe and at home with your lovely lady soon. Bizzy |
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Re: Have you Ever?
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by venkat on
Saturday, 29th March 2003 @ 01:47:35 AM AEST
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| Perfect.. absolutely beautiful poem.. Oh friend.. i see your beautiful soul in this poem.. venkat |
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Re: Have you Ever?
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by The_Phantom on
Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 07:00:07 PM AEST
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Thank you all for your comments, Your words keep me writing. Thank you.
The Phantom |
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Re: Have you Ever?
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by butter0606 on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 01:59:21 PM AEST
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| loved your poem, it was very romantic and well related keep up the good work! |
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Re: Have you Ever?
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by windowguy on
Sunday, 12th April 2009 @ 03:29:19 AM AEST
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| Well written. Strong first line, it drew me in to the poem. Nice feel-good poem. |
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