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Oh the Joys of apple pies...............!!!!!!!!!!
Contributed by
brew
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Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 10:01:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
FamilyPoems
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Little ones and all their joys
Makes you appericate the more and noise
You look with them and see what they see
With an innocent eye, that now one believes
You sit and think, and so much in aye
makes you wonder, why .oh why
Precious sounds of all the surprise
And all the gleem when you see much more!
You do see, what life has given
And want to give what ones is missing
So run and jump and be a kid
Then shut the eyes, and be the miss...........................
Just know things, are so precious in life.......So dont take anything for granted!
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2004-09-03 22:01:14]
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Re: Oh the Joys of apple pies...............!!!!!!!!!!
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by AspenGlow on
Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 11:40:59 AM AEST
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Ahhhhhh there is nothing that can compare.....as watching angles play .......babies and watching that sweet
tender innocent joy.
Beautiful poem, yes.
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Re: Oh the Joys of apple pies...............!!!!!!!!!!
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 12:34:26 PM AEST
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Dear Brew,
You have commented so nicely so many times on my poetry........and I just keep missing you! But not this time or every gain
I've got you in my favorites and so you won't go neglected if I can help it.
This poem is so bright, positive and filled with joyful light!!! You are like the sunshine, that can't help but shine, and when I read your beautiful poem I could just hear your loving heart rhyme!
Lovely, my what talent you have!
Loviingcritters
ConSue
AND A GREAT WELCOME TO YPDC
So glad to have you aboard!!!
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