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skin like porslin
Contributed by
xemptydecemberx
on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 09:19:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Everythings a mess
And I am too
This ongoing saga
Seems to be all that we do
Somehow the blade
Always finds my skin
And every fight with my mind
I never seem to win
The cuts never shallow,
They only grow deep
I hide the pain inside
These feelings that I keep
No one here knows
And I care to tell few
I hate myself for
These things that I do
I fight it again
But I find the blood running
I can hear footsteps
But no one is coming
A knock on the door
Ends the quiet
I tell them Im changing
They always buy it
Little do they know
That when they leave
Back to the blade,
Up goes the sleeve
In goes the tip
Leaving a trail
On skin like porsalin
So fragile and frail
Copyright ©
xemptydecemberx
... [
2004-09-03 21:19:46]
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Re: skin like porslin
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by screwup on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 09:26:19 PM AEST
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| I loved it!!!! hell, i love all your poetry.... awesome write... I know how you feel, and you are loved. |
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Re: skin like porslin
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by InnerBeautyQueen on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 09:28:28 PM AEST
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oh i loved it
lol
and you spell like i do
it took me 2 months to learn to spell porcelain |
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Re: skin like porslin
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by Rae on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 09:32:44 PM AEST
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| please don't do that to yourself.. u r loved and needed.. btw, i loved ur poem. |
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Re: skin like porslin
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 09:33:29 PM AEST
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| I really liked your poem. Each line made me want to read quicker, just to get to the next line. The way you wrote it really helped the content. Great job! Lotsahugs! |
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Re: skin like porslin
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by xemptydecemberx on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 09:49:49 PM AEST
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| lol i figured, since i cant figure out how the hell to spell it, that i'd pick 2 ways and go from there, but go figure that both were wrong!! |
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