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The Danger in Tranquillity?
Contributed by
WorthlesSanity666
on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 08:16:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I betray my sinful lover,
my despair, my sorrow, and my suicide.
I slip into a crevice filled with
hopes and dreams and joyful tears.
I grab at pleasant bubbles
and smile for happy flowers.
I lay in the grass and
roll in the sun, basking in tranquillity.
I run and run,
just to feel the freedom.
But one day I’ll over shoot,
I fall into a deeper hole.
There the darkness shall recover me.
There I shall rendezvous with the sad
destruction of myself once more.
Copyright ©
WorthlesSanity666
... [
2004-09-03 20:16:22]
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Re: The Danger in Tranquillity?
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by Lionel on
Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 10:23:05 AM AEST
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| Sometimes we may not know that we've paid already - and yet payment may be just around the corner. Sometimes the conscience, in rememberance, makes us pay. Sometimes, someone else pays for the transgression. A substitute? |
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Re: The Danger in Tranquillity?
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by afterdark on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 06:03:38 PM AEST
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This was very well wrote,,i liked it..
AfterDark.. |
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Re: The Danger in Tranquillity?
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 09:25:11 AM AEST
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Sometimes the price is good, unless we let it become bad, we make the price with our desires.
Awesome write |
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