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It SuCkS
Contributed by
MysticFireFairy
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Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 07:26:46 PM in AEST
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it sucks to look in the mirror and hate what you see It sucks to cry yourself to sleep every night It sucks to feel as if your always bein judged It sucks to have never experenced love It sucks to feel alone all the time It sucks to keep everything inside It sucks to have to let people go It sucks to have feelings you cannot show It sucks to think things will never get beter It sucks to forever sit and wonder why It sucks to feel like you dont belong It sucks to not no whats wrong It sucks to feel theres nothing to live for It sucks to think you cant go on anymore It sucks to feel like you have no purpose..............
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Re: It SuCkS
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by waos on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 07:35:53 PM AEST
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it sucks..
wait that's not what i meant.. i'm sorry.. i was trying to be funny. but yeah i know what you mean. life's not an easy thing.
good write.. just next time add in separate lines so its easier to read.
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Re: It SuCkS
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by bobose on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 07:44:48 PM AEST
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dude nice rite but even though u didnt rite it in ur poem dont slit ur wrists cause thats wat people do wen they fell that way
any ways nice rite
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Re: It SuCkS
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 07:51:24 PM AEST
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I'm with waos... you need separate lines. I felt exactly like that when in my early teens. You captured the emotion perfectly (and that was before we had the word 'sucks' in our vocabulary)!
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Re: It SuCkS
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by priss on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 08:57:52 PM AEST
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| alot of times, everything sucks! hallelujah for poetry and being able to get those feelings out of your head!!!!!! |
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Re: It SuCkS
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by assassinatorgirl on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 10:24:44 PM AEST
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| omgosh so sad, i feel like that a lot, it's got a nice flow to it. great job! |
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