|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
happy like me
Contributed by
blackholesun
on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 06:09:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
|
fun in dreams,everything is what it seems,
kisses are kisses nothing more nothing less,
feel the sun and its sweet caress,
no emptyness or the void,
all evil has been destroyed,
love embodied us all,
always spring never fall,
playing with a bouncie ball,
this is happy you never cry,never give up,lay down and die,
be happy like me give it one more try!
Copyright ©
blackholesun
... [
2004-09-03 18:09:49]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: happy like me
(User Rating: 1 )
by Overstated on
Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 09:02:05 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
say what you feel thats always been my stance on writing poetry...
this is a lovely couplet of a poem - nicely different to other poets. excellent |
|
|
Re: happy like me
(User Rating: 1 )
by AspenGlow on
Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 11:16:44 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Thank you for this happy verse, you have blessed this one and made them smile.
Have to thank that hippynurse, and to you as well, her for the introduction to your work, and you for the fine work you write.
Thank you.
Chris |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
