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Malefic Vengeance

Contributed by TheLastStringCut on Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 03:48:00 PM in AEST
Topic: fictional

Red eyes pierce the pitch-black night
A warrior stands by a grave
His family lay, whom he couldn't save
However, back then he couldn't fight

He slings his sword over his shoulder
Hops down hills, towards a mill, boulder to boulder
He stops at a door and hears inside
The troupe of Angels whom took his life

From inside an angel speaks aloud
'Men, you've slain the demon, you've made me proud
Enjoy your hard-earned, much needed vacation
And take heart in the fact that you've killed that abomination'

Then as they sat onto the floor
The entrance exploded, something stood at the door
A dark and mysterious figure did stare
And the Angels shrank back under the scruitany of his glare

They saw his red eyes, the tell-tale sign
thus hopped up the Angels, creatures divine
But no match we they for the speed of the demon
Who had lost his whole family earlier that eve'nin'

He opened his mouth and here roared the demon
'You sick Angelic ********!, you'll pay for what you did!
You killed even my little brother, and he was but a kid!
When I'm through with you, you'll die screamin'!'

With the flick of a wrist, the swing of a sword
A feathered wing fell onto the floor
The spray of blood filled the air a red mist
And yet, the demon still came on, quite *****

'All we ever wanted was quiet and peace
Then you showed up and destroyed EVERYTHING
So be sure to say farewell
For after you're dead, I'll visit you in hell!'

The screams of agony then commence
The splatter of blood filled the room
The air thick with blood, death and doom
For this was the wrath of an angry demon, his Malefic Vengeance

Copyright © TheLastStringCut ... [ 2004-09-03 15:48:00]
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Re: Malefic Vengeance (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 06:33:17 PM AEST
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Such deep and ........differ thoughts. not bad .not bad at all......lil dark , but feelings you have!

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