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Rain
Contributed by
poetmarie
on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 03:22:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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RAIN
The air smells so sweet, so fresh;
It's so crisp my nose tingles.
There's a slight breeze
Brushing my face -
It's going to rain;
Inside I jump for glee.
It starts now,
A single drop splashes
Upon my forehead and rolls;
Then another, and another.
My senses awaken.
It comes more steadily now,
But I don't take shelter.
I stand there - in the rain,
Not minding that I am wet.
I love the rain, it enlivens me.
A simple pleasure to watch
Raindrops splash on the ground,
Individual but together.
A small puddle forms;
I can see my reflection,
And I smile.
The sound of falling rain
Pleases my ear.
There's nothing quite like it.
Sometimes it befriends
Thunder and lightening.
I am struck with awe and wonder
So beautiful, the sky,
Picture perfect with a rainbow.
I am drenched now,
But I don't mind,
Because I love the rain.
So sweet,
So fresh,
So crisp,
Delightful,
Rain.
Copyright ©
poetmarie
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2004-09-03 15:22:40]
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Re: Rain
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 02:19:27 AM AEST
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oh my god!!! this was an outstanding peice of writibg. damn those cretins who read and don't comment. simply beautiful. you know me and theMoth are starting a rebellion because people like us get ignored and neglected. you should join up. really all we do is write satire or post biting comments in the forums, but oh what fun. anyway you are an amazing poetess. peace and love,
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Re: Rain
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by The_Unknown on
Friday, 26th November 2010 @ 04:28:28 PM AEST
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I love this! :)
For most people, rain makes them sad. This takes rain to a completely new level ;) I must agree with you, I love the rain as well.
Fantastic write.
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