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Love's First Kiss
Contributed by
ShadowsCloud
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Tuesday, 5th November 2002 @ 12:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Love's first kiss brings such bliss.
It's something you don't want to miss.
It's wonderful but true,
and the memories will always stay wtih you.
When you were younger it was hard to see,
how truelove could actually be.
Now your older, mature, and wiser.
It's easier to see, how love's first kiss was meant to be.
Copyright ©
ShadowsCloud
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2002-11-05 12:30:00]
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Re: Love's First Kiss
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by stephy on
Tuesday, 5th November 2002 @ 12:39:26 PM AEST
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| this is incredibly sweet... short but sweet. very nice. |
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Re: Love's First Kiss
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by darkkai on
Tuesday, 5th November 2002 @ 01:00:00 PM AEST
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This poem reall brought a tear to my eye.
I never thought of using plain simple words to match a feeling if something so great as a first kiss. no wonder my words are hard to understand. keep it up |
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Re: Love's First Kiss
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by OreO on
Tuesday, 5th November 2002 @ 01:12:36 PM AEST
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Bravo!! Absolutely
Beautiful, Taking loves
first kiss and putting
words to it like this
I really enjoyed this
Keep em' coming i want
to read more
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: Love's First Kiss
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by fancyface4898 on
Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 04:40:23 AM AEST
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| so sweet short and to the point good write |
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Re: Love's First Kiss
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by wordsy on
Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 10:43:16 PM AEST
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If we could only hold to that feeling of the first kiss, then maybe, just maybe there would be less divorce and separation in this world.
So you hang on, and keep writing. I promise to return and read some more, but for now I must say goodnight.
wordsy. |
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Re: Love's First Kiss
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by ShadowsCloud on
Sunday, 4th May 2003 @ 11:51:59 PM AEST
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That is so true. I try to hold on to the memory of every moment, that is shared while I am in love. Thanks for the comment.
ShadowsCloud |
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