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November Revisited
Contributed by
reilt
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Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 11:23:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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The time, it passes
Days emptying into each other
Spilling memories hour after hour
Glimpses of previous pleasures
Tempting the taste for them now
It goes unsatisfied
Yet remembered
The precious moments
Brief in their lasting
Still worthwhile
For the moving of the earth
You were the destined wanderer
I, a lone star
Chained to each other by the shared
And the common direction of our hearts
The time,
I guide and bide as it passes
Days pouring out as well as in
My mind spent
It is
November revisited.
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reilt
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2004-09-03 11:23:22]
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Re: November Revisited
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by RavenShadows on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 11:24:28 AM AEST
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| This is very well writen, kind of sad, kind of happy, very nice :) |
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Re: November Revisited
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 12:08:09 PM AEST
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| "Destined wanderer" - I like that phrase. Well written. |
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