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Meal for a Vampire
Contributed by
RavenShadows
on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 11:09:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Sweet dark soul
Glide your hands
Across my pale skin
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder
In your eyes
I am an angel of the night
Pasty...palid....pure white skin
Accented by crystal blue eyes
And darkly crimson lips
Lay me back into the velvety sheets
My blood pulses through my veins
All harmonious
Beat by beat in time with yours
Above me your carress is soft yet firm
Your breath on my neck
Makes me shiver with anticipation
I feel your teeth break quickly through my flesh
Warmth fills my body
As my soul seeps into you
You feed off of my life
And I
Sleep
Copyright ©
RavenShadows
... [
2004-09-03 11:09:55]
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Re: Meal for a Vampire
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by deathdrop on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 11:16:07 AM AEST
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wow!
this one's amazing too, i love the whole gothic and vampire sene. it's very good. |
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Re: Meal for a Vampire
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by Nazmythian on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 11:33:11 AM AEST
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That was incredible, I really liked reading it. Very descriptive, and after spending the last few days in that mind set, writing dark vampiric things, I have a much larger appreciation for them now. Thanks for the read.
Nazmythian ~ |
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Re: Meal for a Vampire
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 12:35:36 PM AEST
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| Being prey instead of the preyee sends shivers likes ghost walking down my back. Good poem! |
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