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Lieing Eyes
Contributed by
silverjade
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Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 10:53:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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empty eyes look at me
taking in what they want to see
never right.
close your eyes
and look again
lieing eyes
take inside the reality of this
and never judge for what you see
let me be
and you will see
that Iam much more
than what you perceive.
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silverjade
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2004-09-03 10:53:01]
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Re: Lieing Eyes
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by RavenShadows on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 10:55:46 AM AEST
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| Nicely written, not to short, not to long, but very pointful. |
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Re: Lieing Eyes
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 11:00:18 AM AEST
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Yes you're right, its too easy to make a judgement on someone before really getting to know them
Steve |
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Re: Lieing Eyes
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by deathdrop on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 11:37:32 AM AEST
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yeah this has happened to me too many times in the past as well! and i'm sure we're not the only people.
this poem is good.
thanks for sharing it. |
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Re: Lieing Eyes
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by BrandySwanson on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 01:15:18 PM AEST
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this has happened to me not long ago. I've always been told this and I Quote:
Dont judge others till you know the facts and until you know the person your judging.
great job on writing this one.
Brandy |
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Re: Lieing Eyes
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by all4him on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 01:33:55 PM AEST
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like everyone else has said its happened to me. by puttin it into a poem you explained it for all of us. thanks
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