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My Own World
Contributed by
Jenn2004
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Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 05:38:08 AM in AEST
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I am lost, dont want to be found,
Im in my own world, dont want u around,
In my own world, i am safe here,
nothing around me, i dont fear,
I have closed up my heart,
noone can tear it apart,
Ill never get hurt again,
this pain will finally end,
Im in my own world, and thats where ill stay,
Ill stay lost, and i dont want to find the way,
Ill stay in my own world just another day
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Re: My Own World
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by inoc on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 05:48:29 AM AEST
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YOUR POEM IS NICE TO READ
SHORT AND TO THE POINT
well done
cheeers! |
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Re: My Own World
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 08:08:06 AM AEST
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Jenn I know what it is like to feel lost, to wish to hide from the pain, to be blind to the next step.
I wish I was able to give you some emotions to drive away your shadows, something that seems impossible for me to do being an ocean of forbidden blue, but I'll send then in this message instead, hopefully enough to surfice.
You are a very talented writter, and you know how to open ones eyes to the what others are going through, Your poems are like a tapestry being painted alittle at a time as you write some more.
I wish you all the best and hope you have a beautiful future.
Take Care always
Kindragon |
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Re: My Own World
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by alecfernadez on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 08:25:23 AM AEST
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Everyone knows what its like to be lost, we;ve all been lost at some time or another, and this poem brings that feeling out to perfection
Keep up the good work! |
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Re: My Own World
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by sweetangeluk on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 09:56:53 AM AEST
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Jen a wonderful poem may you find your way to open up to love again. Be open and receptive to love when it comes and never settle for second best.
A wonderful poem
Love Sweetangelukxxxx |
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Re: My Own World
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by emystar on
Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 03:50:32 AM AEST
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i can certainly relate to this one but I havn't given up tho.
Hang tuff and keep up the awesome writing.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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