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Save Me
Contributed by
iluvpencils
on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 03:13:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I scream so loud
I like to think you can hear me
Like to think you'll come down and
Save me
Save me
I cut so deep
Cuz I love the feel of blood
Running down my arm
And I like to think you see it
I like to think you can save me
I'd love to look to the skies and see your face
Cuz when I close my eyes and
That's all that's there
I screamed so loud
I swear you can hear me
I close my eyes and
Let you save me
Save me
Replace my fear
With the cure
To my tears
Wipe away my blood
Just save me
Come down and save me
Because I'm so convinced you are real
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2004-09-03 03:13:57]
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Re: Save Me
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 04:31:46 AM AEST
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| awesome. as i said in a previous comment to one of your Kurt poems, im a diehard Nirvana fan, so this just hit the spot! |
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Re: Save Me
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by Alina on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 02:24:53 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed this poem and I could imagine it in a song.....but.....Kurt's gone and you seem TOO obsessed...... really get over it...... yet..........good write
ALINA |
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Re: Save Me
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 09:37:33 PM AEST
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| dnt worry bout the comment from Alina, u rok dude! this is great! |
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