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Bleed Me Quickly, Lovely
Contributed by
Exodus-On-Life
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Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 01:14:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I take with you the best of me
Something you can always keep around
It's not like you really wanted to destroy me
It's not like anyone really heard a sound
So cut me with your evil doings
Razor's edge laced with rusted steel
The raw feeling of splitting flesh
And the warm blood as I waited to peel
Still I had only one thing for you
It was the warmth upon your face
That fateful day you claimed me forgotten
And now you're stuck in that awful place
You've seemed to have dropped your steel
Yet, forcefully armed you will always be
With deceitful words and emotions
A slice of contempt mixed upon me
And as I sat there bleeding
And I smiled up at you
You knew I would have rather been there
I would have rather been bleeding with you
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Re: Bleed Me Quickly, Lovely
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by Starlilly on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 12:08:49 PM AEST
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wow! this is awesome work ~
You've seemed to have dropped your steel
Yet, forcefully armed you will always be
With deceitful words and emotions
A slice of contempt mixed upon me
that is my fave part of it all! Awesome! |
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Re: Bleed Me Quickly, Lovely
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by Ali on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 06:21:18 AM AEST
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| This is powerfull stuff, certain words of that poem hold the power and give it real meaning. I suggest to people that they read it more than once to get a good interpretation of it |
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