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Open your hand
Contributed by
the_story_of_the_year
on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 12:23:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Beautifully crafted to please the eye
You were put here to be loved
There's no reason to ignore me
No reason to notice me
Believe when I say
That I need you always
All the things you haven't said
Keep me awake
I didn't even get your name
I've always been afraid
I always will be
Open your hand
Show me new feelings
Keep sleeping tonight
Dream of things that you need
Open your eyes slowly
See through in to me
Just feel
Don't think
Tell me what to do
Tell me who to be
If you could see yourself now
You'd see what beauty is to me
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2004-09-03 00:23:18]
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Re: Open your hand
(User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 12:27:34 AM AEST
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| very good.....reminds me of mckuen........ |
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Re: Open your hand
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by mysticpoet on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 02:34:31 PM AEST
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I enjoyed your poen very much, very well written
You have a lot of talent |
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