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Only Choice
Contributed by
Essentially9
on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 09:54:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Only Choice
I am empty
Without you
I am numb
To this feeling
I am nothing
No reason to live
At all anymore
It's useless
To try to hold on
I am lost
Without purpose
I am fading
Farther away
Into nothing
I am useless
To this world
I can't hold on anymore
I've lost my purpose
To live any longer
I'll just be forgotten
After I'm gone
Letting go for something more
Living was just a mistake
That I could never rectify
No matter how hard I tried
Letting go for something else
Death's the only choice
There's left to make anymore
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Essentially9
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2004-09-02 21:54:35]
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Re: Only Choice
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by AnastasiaN on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 10:12:31 PM AEST
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| i feel like this many a time, as long as you die on paper tho....but death is still more painful than life...trust me. good write tho and as long as you keep spreading words, maybe you can spread the pain even thinner. |
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Re: Only Choice
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by afterdark on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 10:24:34 PM AEST
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Another very good write here..Your stiff gets better..
AfterDark.. |
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Re: Only Choice
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by savedbydeath on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 11:27:47 PM AEST
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wow awsome writ J,wow have i ever told u how deadly u r to urself?LOL...hey theres more to life then death itself,ur so young u still have to grow up and meet the man of ur dreams get married have kids watch them follow ur foot steps and grow old and die happy.Great write keep up the good work
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Re: Only Choice
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by jaeann on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 12:08:40 AM AEST
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| aaahhhh the dark recesses of depression......i have tasted that gray path......hang in there ......the light is under the door......peace :) |
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Re: Only Choice
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by Jenn2004 on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 01:04:14 AM AEST
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| Great write i feel like that too. I got a poem i wrote on here called depression. |
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Re: Only Choice
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 01:35:10 AM AEST
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| awesome, i feel like that alot, uve out alot of peoples feelings into words |
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Re: Only Choice
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by Rhei76 on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 11:56:42 PM AEST
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Your words are written to my appeal.
I remember once. Then I belived in such.
As for now .....
So I tell you this, I wish you a smile. |
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Re: Only Choice
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by afterdark on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 09:24:42 PM AEST
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| another good one here |
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