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The Universe
Contributed by
sweetheart
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Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 08:55:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Silence.
Silence of isolation.
Off into a thousand dawns of a new day.
Settings of suns a million times.
Life.Change.Outcome.
Into never ceasing oceans.
Waves repeatedly roll atop the surfaces of ideas.
Stars dying then more shining.
Explosions in the minds of new humans.
Past, future, present.
The universe never stops.
Copyright ©
sweetheart
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2004-09-02 20:55:38]
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Re: The Universe
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 09:10:06 PM AEST
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Sometimes to just write the words that come into your mind works. I think it did this time.
There is a lot of meaning to this one and I liked it,
Well done
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Re: The Universe
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 11:09:39 AM AEST
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I can't think why anyone would think that it was dumb, I certainly didn't
Here's to many more "non dumb" writes, lol
Steve |
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Re: The Universe
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by Nazmythian on
Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 06:39:56 AM AEST
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Great brain food ... many thoughts that stem out from this write ... it'll keep me thinking for a while.
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Re: The Universe
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by mcloysoccer on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 09:25:16 PM AEST
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| WOW, DADGUM!! EXCELLENT WRITE!!! Keep up the good work and keep thinking, or not thinking and let the words pour from your mind in gushing waves of emotion. |
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