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Brother Father
Contributed by
rebelshorty0418
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Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 08:44:53 PM in AEST
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its weird you see
your more of a father
than my father is to me
you help me through hard time
listen to my troubles
talk to me when i need a friend
and walk me through the bitter end
although we may fight
and i say i hate you for a brother
i'd never in this world trade you for any other
i ask you to do alot for me
and of course you do
i hope you understand its all because i love you
i look up to you alot
you just dont understand
your a crowd pleaser and i'm your # 1 fan
i just thought i'd tell you how i feel
but i know your thinkin "what's the big deal?"
after all you've done this for 15 years
been there through all the pain and tears
i wanna pay you back for all that you've done for me
maybe this is not enough to make you see
how thankful i am but i dunno why you bother
bein in my life and bein a father
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Re: Brother Father
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 10:05:45 PM AEST
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AAWW This was so touching a sweet!
Christina |
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Re: Brother Father
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by Jenn2004 on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 01:19:28 AM AEST
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| That was a good peom, i know your brother will like it. Im glad hes there for you. |
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Re: Brother Father
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 01:44:15 AM AEST
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| my favourite big brother is 8 years older than me, and this is so how i feel about him! well done and thankyou! |
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Re: Brother Father
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by Solnubis on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 03:25:32 PM AEST
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| I like this poem, and I hope your brother did too. And I'm sure he knows how much you love him. love ones always fight and the best part is when we make up. I wish I had someone in my life like this. Well written. |
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