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The Girl With No Face
Contributed by
Seikjo
on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 08:31:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I cant be seen.
But i want to.
Why wont you see?
I hide in fear.
Fear of everything here.
Everything that can see.
Who am i here?
I do want love.
But you wont love.
If you know who-
who i am here.
Then you might love-
love who i am.
I have no face-
No eyes, no ears.
No nose no mouth.
I have a mask-
that i put on.
It sheilds my face-
from your warey eyes.
My face mask helps-
Helps me to hide.
Hide every little thing.
Helps me to live-
Live my life here.
Here in my world-
Of my own soul.
Of my own pain.
Of my own life.
Of my own body.
Copyright ©
Seikjo
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2004-09-02 20:31:48]
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Re: The Girl With No Face
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 09:12:38 PM AEST
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| don't be so hard on yourself....it was only a release in tension.....grief is one of the hardest emotions put rules to.....there are none......deep profound words you wrote.....good work!! |
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Re: The Girl With No Face
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 10:05:45 PM AEST
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| you have a very redundant style. it takes one second to commit the action but it takes a lifetime to live through the consequences. |
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Re: The Girl With No Face
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 01:48:53 AM AEST
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| awesome poem, u hav gr8 talent |
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