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Spring and Summer and Autumn and Winter
Contributed by
TheSchroedmeister
on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 05:42:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Spring and Winter traded places,
Because Spring wanted to feel Lonely,
And Winter wanted to feel young again
But Winter’s snow burned Spring’s feet,
And Winter soon tired of the early year’s heat,
So the woman and the child stayed home
Autumn was always halfway to Lonesome,
And asked Summer for a happy spell, but
Summer was stubborn and stayed where she was,
So Autumn snuck in through the back door
(that sneaky Autumn),
And Summer sent October after her
(She could always try again)
And while Spring played Lonely,
Winter played Young,
And Summer squelched all
Of Autumn’s trite fun,
Nobody on earth seemed to notice
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TheSchroedmeister
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2004-09-02 17:42:47]
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Re: Spring and Summer and Autumn and Winter
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by pixie on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 06:03:03 PM AEST
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a very intresting write, great poem,
pixie xx |
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Re: Spring and Summer and Autumn and Winter
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 06:15:56 PM AEST
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| yes very interesting. but those are usually the best to stretch your mind into some other perspective. =] |
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Re: Spring and Summer and Autumn and Winter
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 06:28:21 PM AEST
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| clever and well thought out! |
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Re: Spring and Summer and Autumn and Winter
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by brew on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 07:24:21 PM AEST
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| Cute..Aknowlogy.........I like the ones like that.It makes for one who takes the time, to think and use the ones own opinion! Like it! |
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Re: Spring and Summer and Autumn and Winter
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 08:31:43 PM AEST
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Great analogy.... loved this....
Jenni |
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Re: Spring and Summer and Autumn and Winter
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 09:53:00 PM AEST
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Extremely unique. I really like this piece. It is not one you can just skim through. You really have to read and think about it. Great work.
Rita |
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Re: Spring and Summer and Autumn and Winter
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 02:11:32 AM AEST
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As always, your characterisations are exemplary, and you always provoke introspection, contemplation and ultimately wonder and pleasure at your unique brand of expression.
I'd like to think you'd submit at least one of your poems to the YPDC anthology - you'd make it a worthy purchase, in my opinion. |
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