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Cut
Contributed by
AliaAnn15
on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 04:18:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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cut myself
with a razor so sharp
lay it on the shelf
and slip into the dark
zig zag patterns
across my wrist
im on the floor bleeding
im finally feeling bliss
the one thing thats left
the only thing i control
is my life and my death
this slit is taking its toll
ill never forget
the things that you do
and you wont forget
i did this to hurt you
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AliaAnn15
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2004-09-02 16:18:54]
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Re: Cut
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by diamond_tears on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 04:49:19 PM AEST
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this is really good. i know how you feel!
take care xxx |
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Re: Cut
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by silverjade on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 04:50:11 PM AEST
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| amazing poem |
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Re: Cut
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by Sweetheart on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 05:36:50 PM AEST
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This is a very emotional filled write. The words flow really well. Although, if this truly happens it is very sad. I hope that you won't hurt yourself like the poem says, I hope you find peace within not to do it. Best wishes.
Sweetheart |
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Re: Cut
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by Jenn2004 on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 01:23:57 AM AEST
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| Good write, i def feel like that too. |
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Re: Cut
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by screwup on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 12:17:20 PM AEST
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| very good write... believe me, I know what your going through... cutting is an addiction... I don't care what anyone says. Writing helps and you apear to be good at it... keep it up. |
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