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Hugging My Pillow Tight
Contributed by
pixie
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Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 03:53:39 PM in AEST
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Hugging my pillow tight,
When I’m alone late at night,
Feeling so small & alone,
A chill lies within my bones.
Wishing I could go back in time,
Make all wrongs seem fine,
But I can’t I have to live,
With all the things I had to give.
I will forever hang my head in shame,
There is only me who’s to blame,
I said & done some terrible things,
Took away people’s wings.
I can never love me for who I am,
Not as long as I carry the can,
Looking in the mirror is quite hard,
When your heart has been marred.
I hate the person who is inside,
The goodness long ago died,
All that’s left is the black soul in me,
Never again will I feel free.
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Re: Hugging My Pillow Tight
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 04:16:05 PM AEST
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Somehow you've got to forgive yourself for whatever it is you're persecuted by. I would like to think that this would come by a revelation of some sort, gradual or otherwise . . . perhaps . . .
All I can do here is wish you a happy holiday and a break from the hate in your mirror, and that you find some relief thereafter.
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Re: Hugging My Pillow Tight
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by AliaAnn15 on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 04:21:53 PM AEST
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| this is so sad! Very well written though |
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Re: Hugging My Pillow Tight
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by MomentInTime on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 05:23:47 PM AEST
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A good write Pixie.
Jordan oxo
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Re: Hugging My Pillow Tight
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by Luinil on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 06:13:10 PM AEST
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| beautiful writing as always-- know how you feel* |
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Re: Hugging My Pillow Tight
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 06:31:58 PM AEST
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retribution- do something to make up for alls the wrongs, to balance them out.
Also there must be some good if you have remorse.
I have read plenty of your other writes, you do have good in you from what I see.
Hang in there pixie |
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Re: Hugging My Pillow Tight
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by TheRaven on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 07:28:32 PM AEST
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as always, a very deep, emotional write.
keep you chin up, don't feel so guilty. remember, there's always someone out there who loves you (there's usually more than one!).
keep up the great work....
the raven |
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Re: Hugging My Pillow Tight
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by bernard on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 02:57:06 AM AEST
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| Pixie this is not like you where are all your emotionally stable poems that you sent. Please do not feel guiltyy at something you can not overcome. bernard |
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Re: Hugging My Pillow Tight
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 02:57:33 AM AEST
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Oh but you must little Pixie......realize we are all very imperfect, and as you look back forgive yourself.......then go on and try to do better.......but don't look back and then stop!
That never helps anyone......you must go one. Just forgive and go on!
You can be that strong.......I know
Poetic hugs
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Re: Hugging My Pillow Tight
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by alecfernadez on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 08:11:49 AM AEST
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this is a brilliantly written poem, it creates a sense of hopelessness and pessasim (excuse spelling) and its incredibly sad to read, but yet intreguing becuase of your honesty.
ATF |
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Re: Hugging My Pillow Tight
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 11:16:17 AM AEST
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A deeply troubled soul cries out in this one.I'm sorry for the way that you feel and though I realise words probably can't heal I wish you good fortune and less pain for the future
Steve |
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Re: Hugging My Pillow Tight
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by eatfresh22 on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 06:25:52 PM AEST
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I beg to differ. I think that there is much more than black inside of your soul. The part of you that hates the bad you...is the good you. (if that makes sense). Never lose hope, sometimes it is the only thing which keeps us alive.
~Carrie~ |
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