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My Creation
Contributed by
kishdaswani
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Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 02:11:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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my heart screams within a blaze of inner desires,
my body materializes what my mind conceives.
a burning sensation runs through my body,
a vision appears, wrapped around a moment of ecstasy.
images soaring, passions are flaring,
my body dances to the beat of my heart,
slowly my soul is breaking free..
until it is finally released upon the veins of the earth.
Copyright ©
kishdaswani
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2004-09-02 14:11:03]
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Re: My Creation
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 05:11:16 PM AEST
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Wow. I wish I got that everytime I was about to write a poem . .. I may not even get around to writing one, I'd be so exhausted . . .
Very . . . energetic.
Keep writing. |
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Re: My Creation
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by Millennium on
Thursday, 11th May 2006 @ 10:16:37 PM AEST
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| i can definately feel the rush of that poem. whenever i write a poem, i feel all that, then something else..something unexplainable...but what you have written there is better than anything i could ever do. |
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