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killers mind

Contributed by Hannah_Heaven on Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 12:29:37 PM in AEST
Topic: psychoticpoems



the lightening is cracking the black sky
the stars do not exsist
the silence is ringing
and the blood ive spilt is dripping
fresh flesh lays open
and i stand
confused
looking down on the body i stripped of life
my hands find my eyes
and i try to scratch,get the image away
but the icey tears
wipe the pain away
and im left
staring down
on the body
i so long to hug and kiss better
i couldnt stop that stranger
who takes over me so many times
i bend back down
the rain is pouring
im cold and drenched
the wholesome silence
is like the world is mourning
for this innocent life,i murdered
with these thoughts im glazed
and my mind is reversing
i close my eyes
and the nightmares begin.....

im walking down the street
the sun is shining,beaming happily
the sky is cloudless and blue
and the children are playing
they are all smiling
and so am i
a young girl so sweet and full of life is skipping with her sister
i watch her daily
and the stranger has taken over
he has chosen his victim......
in the dead of night
i awake and slip the knife in my coat
and i make my way to to there house
its a storm outside
and as i reach the door
i click the lock open with the knife
and make my way up the stairs
i come to a bubblegum pink door
and my own thoughts flutter inside like a butterfly
but he shakes them away
i find myself inside a childrens bedroom
i see her,shes asleep next to her sister
i tip toe over to her sister
and i grab her throat
she cant cry for help
i get my knife out and awake the other
her tiny eyes open
and she goes to shout but i point to her sister
a tiny tear runs down her cheek
and i whisper'if you scream ill kill her(and i point to her sister)and if you scream ill kill her(and i point back to the girl)'
they both nod
as we gather the girls
i slit her sisters throat
she goes to scream
and i rush her out of the door
the door is now red with blood...

i take her outside in the streets
and i blank out the stranger takes over
i shake my head and im laying on top of her
her pleas or fading away
and i realise what i have done,i have raped her of all beautiful innocence,and dirtied her soul
as i slit her flesh
i removed each of her organs
and the ground is drenched in her innocent blood
i start to cry
and i get up and run
back to my bed
but i know
as i close my eyes
and i begin to dream of the deaths
i cry and scream out inside
because i have two more to my collection
and ill have one more tomorrow...




Copyright © Hannah_Heaven ... [ 2004-09-02 12:29:37]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: killers mind (User Rating: 1 )
by apollo on Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 12:40:54 PM AEST
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very moving. too graphic to read again but this is amazing work you have done. can not wait to see more.


Re: killers mind (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 02:09:43 PM AEST
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i wish i could have read your original version of this..But this one is very well done to..

AfterDark..




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