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see the girl with ...
Contributed by
grip-wth-broken-fingers
on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 04:52:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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see the girl with the broken smile
thats girl shes mine
see the girl with all the lascerations to her wrist
that girl shes mine
see her mummy never loved her
and her daddy never cared
mummy was an alcoholic
daddy just wasnt there
see the girl with the broken smile
she says she loves me
she says i make her feel alive
seee the girl with ghost white skin
she says she,ll never ever leave
the girl with the scars and the crooked grin
the girl with the ghost white skin
this girl i love i do adore
this girl i would do anything for
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Re: see the girl with ...
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 05:21:59 AM AEST
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| beautiful, very heartfelt, i love it |
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Re: see the girl with ...
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by MoonlitAngel on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 10:07:02 AM AEST
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Wow... I love this... kinda creepy coz the description could easily be me. lol. Great write.
~ Moonlit |
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Re: see the girl with ...
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by Broken_Skin on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 07:07:37 AM AEST
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This was good
I give it a 3 out of 5
I dunno why but the way it flowed didnt do me justice
but still good
sweet topic
if i could award it 3 and a half i would
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