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Another lament......
Contributed by
MomentInTime
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Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 02:35:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
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After months of contemplation
on a problem on my mind,
I arrived at a conclusion
that decided that to find
someone who would fit my wishes
I would have to change my way
and then call on higher powers
and send them words I wish to say.
So one evening up I gathered
thoughts and visions held within,
and from thence composed so slowly
a newer image of a dream
of a who I really wanted
to be close to me and dear,
no confusions, doubts or wonders,
the message sent is to be clear.
So I chose one night of many
and let words take shape and form,
while outside the kitchen window
brewed up such a mighty storm
as though a warning to defer
my meant intentions to not start,
yet undeterred my wish composed
and off it went right from the heart.
To the stars up in the heavens,
I've sent the message to be heard,
bouncing through the silent ether
as an echo not impaired,
with the hope that it will gather
some attention in its course
to a Master of all answers
and a Universal force.
Copyright ©
MomentInTime
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2004-09-02 02:35:02]
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Re: Another lament......
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by AspenGlow on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 03:28:07 AM AEST
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we should lament with such grace.
Beautiful poem
thank you for sharing.
chris |
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Re: Another lament......
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by Flipped_out on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 03:29:55 AM AEST
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I like the simple, yet to the point words used here
I notice you don't have a weakness for endless adjectives and adverbs. some people like that personally i dont
Nice write ty Kx |
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Re: Another lament......
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by critterhideaway on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 08:01:39 PM AEST
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| Nice write, hope you find your dream |
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Re: Another lament......
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 08:11:48 PM AEST
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Wow! This is a wonderful poem! And
so beautifully put. My wish for you is that
your dreams do not go unanswered.
What an amazing image you have created
here...
~Breezy |
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Re: Another lament......
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 12:16:30 AM AEST
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this poem flows really well, excellent work.
wildejohnny. |
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