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summer evening
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
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Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 11:41:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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The sweet smell of grass and dark green trees with hanging boughs of dancing leaves. The evening so cool, dusk descending. Colorful clouds appear never ending.
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Re: summer evening
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by Tanmaya on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 01:53:48 AM AEST
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This is a lovely image.
'Colorful clouds appear never ending.'
- loved that line. |
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Re: summer evening
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by AspenGlow on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 02:24:09 AM AEST
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Beautiful image you have painted.....and the in the title you reminded me of a place in that land, very mystical and magic.....House On The Rocks.......
Thank you for sharing this.
Chris |
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Re: summer evening
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 05:50:09 AM AEST
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Amazing in so few words how you opened the mind to an array of cystal clear images.
Beautifully written poem.
Take Care Always
Kindragon |
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Re: summer evening
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 03:02:36 PM AEST
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loved this! it trips off the tongue and leaves you in awe.
wildejohnny. |
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Re: summer evening
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 08:38:26 PM AEST
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| oooooo you left me wanting more....beautiful.....the essence of a midwestern summer.... |
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Re: summer evening
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by blackholesun on
Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 08:19:12 AM AEST
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| i love the flow of this poem its an uplifting read! |
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Re: summer evening
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by kidpoet_213 on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 09:22:18 PM AEST
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Just beautiful... I love the imagery u use... sounds just like a Parke County, Indiana summer evening to me...
Keep writing... u're a beautiful writer... a master w/ words...
~Donna~
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Re: summer evening
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by OzChick on
Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 10:36:22 PM AEST
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Great imagery, I love evenings like this, with insects buzzing in the background, so peaceful.
~Jenny~ |
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Re: summer evening
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 30th March 2006 @ 05:16:32 AM AEST
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What a pleasant little visit with mother nature. Thank you for taking us with you. Short and beautiful.
Tim
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