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cold
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
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Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 11:18:08 PM in AEST
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You're so cold to me-sometimes baby-you're cold as can be. Blue eyes icy and cold-colder than the coldest sea, frozen swells of white foam-icy tides...distant points far north in those blue eyes. It's your warmth i crave-your warmth i seek. Your golden sun, your warm fresh air to breathe. Gentle waves i long for, on a gentle sea-gentle tides to carry you-gently back to me
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Re: cold
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 01:32:47 AM AEST
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| NICE i like it! |
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Re: cold
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by AspenGlow on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 02:26:59 AM AEST
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You do write of the sweetest dreams, reading them paint with the artistry of a master.
Thank you for sharing.
Chris |
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Re: cold
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by blackholesun on
Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 08:15:43 AM AEST
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i really can relate,
i love this one ,
kee p up the groovy work! |
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Re: cold
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by kidpoet_213 on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 09:13:07 PM AEST
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WOW! Nicely written...
~Donna~ |
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Re: cold
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by OzChick on
Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 10:30:19 PM AEST
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This is a nice write. Nice imagery. I particularly like the last part; "Gentle waves I long for, on a gentle sea-gentle tides to carry you-gently back to me." Beautiful.
~Jenny~ |
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Re: cold
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 30th March 2006 @ 05:13:35 AM AEST
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That's a pretty little poem there, Laurabean. Really nice imagery. It's a little sad yet also has a positive note to it. Hopeful, ya' know.
Thanks,
Tim
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