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If I Could
Contributed by
frozenfire
on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 10:17:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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If the tears I shed were silver,
If my dreams were made of gold,
If I could walk on water,
If I could part the seas,
If I could move the mountains,
If I could save the world,
If I could fly to heaven and back,
I'd give you my wings.
If I could take back yesterday,
If I could turn back time,
If I could erase all the lies,
Erase them, one by one,
If I could make the stars,
Shine brighter than the sun,
If I could last forever,
To count every last one,
If I could stop my heart
From breaking into two
Then maybe I'd be perfect...
Then maybe I'd be good enough for you...
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frozenfire
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2004-09-01 22:17:14]
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Re: If I Could
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by Rhei76 on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 10:35:21 PM AEST
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| excellent write |
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Re: If I Could
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by Jenn2004 on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 12:31:38 AM AEST
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| Good job!!! |
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Re: If I Could
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by MomentInTime on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 01:27:21 AM AEST
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You've written well, that's good enough for me.
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Re: If I Could
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by Bruce on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 02:27:34 AM AEST
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| lovely |
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Re: If I Could
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by Willofree on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 03:12:08 PM AEST
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I liked the poem. It read sad and perhaps angry.... never good enough!
Willofree
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