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The Volunteer II
Contributed by
espeeayzee
on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 09:36:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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While transfixed
I was shot
Oblivious to the crosshairs
aimed in my direction
echoes of gun blasts,
(blam blam blam...)
I look down to find blood
from the countless shots fired
How could I have not seen or heard
the bullets of your intent?
stuck and transfixed,
I was numb to the clues you sent
One cannot help but laugh at the situation
not one bullet hit the heart
instead the gut felt penetration
I asked and therefore received
being a volunteer for the bullets
your aiming gun conceived
The smoke from the fresh cavities
from which I still stand
remind me that secrets
are indeed lethal,
but deadly on the other hand?
You may need a bigger gun
Copyright ©
espeeayzee
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2004-09-01 21:36:04]
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Re: The Volunteer II
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by MsScissors on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 02:02:02 AM AEST
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| good images, work on some transitions, but appealing. Have you read any Kerouac or other beats? I like the sex symbolism, as always. |
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Re: The Volunteer II
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by skyblumoon on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 03:04:14 PM AEST
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Very good. It painted a very vivid picture in my mind.
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