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I'M Sorry
Contributed by
Keila
on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 07:57:10 PM in AEST
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Wether my heart belongs to someone,
or the fangs of hate boil in my blood,
weither i cry my tears,
or if i beed my sorrows.
If i fell the flutter of loves fanciful wings
or i tempt fate,
if i stand alone to face my inner hate,
I shall not be alone,
i am with you.
My heart belongs to nobody,
a stand with my back aganst my fears
i cry my tears in the lonly dark,
and my sorrows still exist.
My heart yurns to tempt fate,
yet i lock it up in a cage
hating myself infinitly.
Never mad at those who are with me
but jelous at there happyness
Copyright ©
Keila
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2004-09-01 19:57:10]
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Re: I'M Sorry
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by Remy on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 08:10:16 PM AEST
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spellcheck and a teddybear, that's what you could use... i like the strong emotions, looking good!
~Remy~ |
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Re: I'M Sorry
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by waos on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 08:25:09 PM AEST
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| teddy bears are the answer to a lot of things. i think if you spent some more time on this it could be developed into something even more amazing than it already is. good write hun |
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Re: I'M Sorry
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 08:51:32 PM AEST
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| good write. being sorry does nothing, but action does. |
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Re: I'M Sorry
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by AspenGlow on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 03:08:29 AM AEST
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My heart belongs to no one, my soul sold long ago, all I have is a broken body and a sorrow of long lost days.....when fate brought me tomorrow and tomorrow never came.
Beautiful appology, thank you for sharing.
Reminded me of someone of long ago.
Chris |
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