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Contributed by savedbydeath on Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 03:53:53 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

disgusting (eww)i hate you
can't you see,you remmind me
of a whore beaten with an
ugly stick(laughing)yep thats you
we used to be good friends
but now all you do is follow that trend(PREP!)
take a shower,than maybe you'll
smell like a flower,probably a dead flower

*****,you make me hurl
you live in a dream-world
you think you're so cute with that pearl
but ***** you're even more uglier(is that impossible)?

think back to about a year ago
do you remember how days were
now you're hanging out with her
can you see what i show

you think you're so perfect
maybe you are,but never
will you be perfect in my
big brown eyes

you're so cruel,the way
you go out that door
each morning,don't you
realize people don't wanna see?

*****,you make me hurl
you live in a dream-world
you think you're so cute with that pearl
but ***** you're even more uglier(is that impossible)?

Copyright © savedbydeath ... [ 2004-09-01 15:53:53]
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Re: ***** (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 10:58:22 PM AEST
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when i saw this was in the friendship section i assumed it would have been about a hrm friendship that was going well. well its nice to know i cannot assume to save my life.

interesting and filled with anger. i felt you could have made this better, but everything in life can be made better. the moderators love you rodney =]

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