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Evil
Contributed by
Delusions
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Tuesday, 5th November 2002 @ 04:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Evil conquers over all.
You can never escape its icy grip,
Its blanket of hatred covers you,
And you are blind from guilt.
It makes you feel alone and helpless,
So you give in to its power,
And give yourself up as its slave.
You realise you can never escape,
It will always be beside you,
In front of you,
all around.
You are its prisoner,
You are its pride,
Its Joy,
Its one and only...
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Delusions
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2002-11-05 04:00:00]
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Re: Evil
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by OreO on
Tuesday, 5th November 2002 @ 04:41:50 AM AEST
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It does seem like the truth
alot of times, and it seems
as though we can't escape
This is a great write
I really enjoyed reading this
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: Evil
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by Sonibe on
Sunday, 15th December 2002 @ 12:45:01 AM AEST
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| ....its all truth....you can't escape the truth....keep up the good work.... |
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Re: Evil
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by Broken_Skin on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 06:57:53 AM AEST
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the fight between good and evil in my head always turns out the way i dont want it to, the evil always wins.....
good write
ive read all your poems now.
cant wait for more....
xxx |
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Re: Evil
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by lilch4ever on
Tuesday, 31st December 2002 @ 12:13:16 AM AEST
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| Very good and yet so true. I really can relate to this poem. Nicely written. |
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Re: Evil
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by unforgiven on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 03:03:51 AM AEST
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so true....the vice like grip of evil. when ur in trouble or feeeling down it feels like the darkness covers everything and there is no end to it. luv u sweety!!!
no more alcohomohole!! haha
becca ~xoxo~ |
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