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Last Curtain Call
Contributed by
pixie
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Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 11:41:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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This will be my last curtain call,
You will witness me as I fall,
Never again will I be able to rise,
No more nights of lonely cries.
I now take my bow out of this world,
Never again will you see this miserable girl,
The one who suffered for so many years,
The one who cried a river of broken tears.
The curtain lays in wait above my head,
When it goes down I will soon be dead,
Goodbye to you all, this is farewell,
I can no longer live in my own hell.
This has been a heartbreaking play,
That has brought me to my end of day,
I am ragged from all life’s afflictions,
Woe has become my lifelong addiction.
This will be my very last act,
As death & I have sealed our pact,
To the river Styx I must go,
Watching as the dead waters flow.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-09-01 11:41:06]
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Re: Last Curtain Call
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by Stellar on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 01:49:54 PM AEST
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This is very moving. However, I'm happy to see that it wasn't really your last act.
I wish there were magic words to say to make the hurt go away. All I can say is not to give up, it can get better.
A great write and I hope there are more to come.
Take care, Stellar |
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Re: Last Curtain Call
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by little_genna on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 01:59:06 AM AEST
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Im so glad this wasnt your act. I would truly miss you! this is a magical poem. Im here for ya if u need to talk.
*hugs u tight*
love and hugs baby
Gen xxxx |
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Re: Last Curtain Call
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by emphaticplacebo on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 08:55:36 AM AEST
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| Very moving poem, I can really dig the vibe in it. The last stanza really summed up things well, overall an excellent piece of work |
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Re: Last Curtain Call
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by screwup on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 12:52:59 PM AEST
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| very emotional and metaforical... it ia a very good write... I can't say that I enjoyed it cause I can't enjoy anyone in this much pain... you are loved more than you could ever know Pixie... just remember that when you think about suicide or when you try it and think about that when you cut. you've helped me a lot through my dark times that I'm still going through now, and I have to admit you've even saved my life once... just remember that okay... I need you. |
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