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Panic
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
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Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 11:19:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I am a lost lonely frightened soul,out to sail on uncharted seas. All others-the nonunderstanders-all have forsaken me. I have been drifting miles upon miles, years on years, in thick cumbersome mists of fallen tears. Will the way out ever be seen?-no maps to follow on, only instinct to exist....upon. - Try to trust it-yourself-your mind; try not to fail THEM,the others. BREATHE SO HARD-must slow down. PERSPIRE PROFUSELY-pretend it's not there!! TIGHTEN UP-BALL UP-I'm so afraid. PALPITATIONS-STRANGE SENSATIONS......PANIC!!!!!! Blackness,sadness. I must find kindness, love to heal. Friend do you know what's real in this raging sea of mine?
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Re: Panic
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by rhyme_me_to_sleep on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 03:03:31 PM AEST
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I know exactly how you feel, nice to see someone else who feels like me at times.
I like how you rhyme the words too. |
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Re: Panic
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by a_bear on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 08:23:20 PM AEST
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Loved it. Went to the hospital for siezures, the seizure went into a panic attack, they gave me valium and something else because I had broken out in hives...suddenly I felt as though I couldn't swallow..or breathe..then I was sliding down a tunnel backwards . It was sooo frightening. A nurse came and very sternly said..YOU DON'T NEED TO SWALLOW.! rotflmao...ok...
I know just where this poem comes from and I love it. |
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Re: Panic
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by kidpoet_213 on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 09:06:38 PM AEST
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I personally have not felt this way... but have a few friends that have panic attacks and have seen the effects firsthand... I can only imagine what it's like... and my imagination doesn't come close I'm sure...
~Donna~ |
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Re: Panic
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by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 07:32:26 PM AEST
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Chilling..
I can't say I know how you feel,
but I get a good idea from this.. your words
A frightening but well written piece-
B |
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Re: Panic
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by OzChick on
Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 10:21:02 PM AEST
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Gee, Laura what an awful feeling, I hope they don't happen all that often. I remember one time when I felt like this, years ago, but it was a one off thing. You wrote this with a great rhythm that captures the reader. Good one!
~Jenny~ |
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Re: Panic
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 30th March 2006 @ 05:09:38 AM AEST
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Aw, Laura. I know this is an older poem but you know I know how it feels.
*ginormous hug*
Nice poem.
Take care,
Love
Tim
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