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Mystic Illusion
Contributed by
perfect-imperfections
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Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 06:31:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Along the side of the mystic illusion
i travel in search of the path to myself
the path which was lost between hope and despair
a path which says find me within thyself
sometimes the vision is vivid and clear
sometimes is becomes blury due to tears
occupied by the pre conceived notions of fate
an find it ifficult to iffer between love and hate!
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Re: Mystic Illusion
(User Rating: 1 ) by skyblumoon on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 04:11:40 PM AEST (User
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This is good but it could be better if you checked your spelling and filled in the missing words. I still like it.
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