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Wave of Mutilation
Contributed by
alecfernadez
on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 06:28:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The ocean shimmers in the sun of late afternoon,
Another floater lays pale and lifeless,
Face down in the uninviting abyss of doom,
Passers-by show little if none interest,
In their million dollar yachts still filled with hope
But vengeance comes to all who ignores this lost soul,
Always lost in their infatuations,
These poignant inhumane wastes will be swallowed whole,
By this growing wave of mutilation,
Divine retribution for ignoring this life
Quietness
Creeping shadows soon grope the unsuspecting sun,
Blocking all rays of light, darkness is here,
The impure ink black ocean begins to retreat,
Yachts are stranded. They are compelled by fear
Adrenaline rushes, they know that its coming
Its Here
A ten foot dark red wave creeps slowly above them,
Inside the swirling depths of blood lies pain,
It’s the blood of the innocent; dead from each sin,
That we have committed just to stay sane,
Silver glistens in the blood; every razor blade…
Death
It comes crashing down on them chocking them to death,
While every razor blade peels of their skin,
The blood soaked waves knock out every single breath,
Their wealth is know worthless; greed is their sin
Dreams of opulence are dead, paucity is left
Retribution
The waves subdue leaving a lake of blood and bone,
Nothing is left,
Nothing at all
But the lost souls of those who created splendour
That wave of mutilation, cleansing all the filth
Copyright ©
alecfernadez
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2004-09-01 06:28:16]
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Re: Wave of Mutilation
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 06:38:29 AM AEST
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i have missed your dark writes, great job,
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Re: Wave of Mutilation
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by Flipped_out on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 07:04:30 AM AEST
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Ohhh I like you. Can I kiss you?
just how I like it
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Re: Wave of Mutilation
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by LouisaMontagu on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 07:07:52 AM AEST
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Hey u long time no writes?? or comments.
Im still hitting them hard..!! as brilliant and talented as ever, commend u
Louisa xx |
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Re: Wave of Mutilation
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 09:55:04 AM AEST
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Gaphic imagary within ever word, oh and the desired effect is almost overwhelming, you have a way of awakening in the mind the very poem alive and raging to get everything trapped within.
Beautifully written.
Take care always
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Re: Wave of Mutilation
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by thumper on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 10:09:24 PM AEST
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Oh, this gave me shivers!! Excellent write. Very graphic and vivid.
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Re: Wave of Mutilation
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by Pyrofungus on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 01:48:43 PM AEST
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Man this is beyond greatness...so horrific and such great imagery!
please comment on my work too
summer |
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