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reflections
Contributed by
grip-wth-broken-fingers
on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 04:59:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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lips laced with poison
mouth full of lies
blood keeps on pouring
sore site for strangers eyes
lies are forever
they never disappear
scars are for eternity
never delve deep enough
to understand why your unhappy
this pouring rain looks so beautiful
when you never see the sun
blur the image with my finger tips
so i can not see inside
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2004-09-01 04:59:18]
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Re: reflections
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 05:38:22 AM AEST
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a very good write, I liked this one alot,
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Re: reflections
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by alecfernadez on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 06:29:31 AM AEST
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I thought this was brilliantly written, and it worked very well.
Well done
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