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crones
Contributed by
cauchy3
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Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 01:12:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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crones (poem)
For songs of loves are crooned
Efforts of loves may last to noon
To kiss them rather than picking the cards
Paramours are their blind spot of arts
Moneys are loves that help on doing
Hi there you still live on
With moneys all planets are green
Private plays have private agreements
Moneys are bailed in lives for below
Shortly I will with her for now
Promise to give but stink to oppose
They are natures of our mothers
Buy you meals are just in cinch
No rucked dresses but loves are inches
Laps are old ruby are white
Knobs on back but spirits are rise
Queens of diamonds and slave of ace
Slaves are captains on ships that banned
Mistresses and dukes are easily gulled
Weakness of human are given rules
Moneys in hands kisses are in touches
Burdens of living are crosses that are rough
Crafts in papers are loves that die
Kneels are adjust not to be knell
She live on with cough drops
With moneys they are guides for positions
Modern medicines are amended in processes
Chimneys of turtles are meals of Oscar
--------Poem by Cheung shun sang=cauchy3-------
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Re: crones
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by mysticpoet on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 10:41:23 AM AEST
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hello
I read your poem, I had a hard time understanding it. Might want to work on it a bit to make it clearer for the reader.
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Re: crones
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by JacobsKK on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 07:45:58 PM AEST
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| I agree with mystic poet. I'm sure you had a good effort though. |
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