|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Clowns of Confusion live
Contributed by
secretwind
on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 10:37:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
insomniac
|
I'm bleeding
I'm needing
to reach out
to touch you
I'm fading
I'm so cold
and thinking
It's all about you,
as the pain
bores deeper
rage is found
and it's beautiful.
Visions of you as you maim
vicious is the look
terror
is the game,
Clowns of confusion
bounce
you laugh
as we fall down
that was then
but
this is now.
In the
Village of the void
the underground
has awakened
sweetly bleeding
forgotten
and forsakened,
Clowns of confusion
bounce
bounce
bounce
we live!!!
ha ha ha
we live!!!
Copyright ©
secretwind
... [
2004-08-31 22:37:51]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Clowns of Confusion live
(User Rating: 1 )
by pyrofairyburning on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 10:49:36 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Pretty damn good. I liked it. |
|
|
Re: Clowns of Confusion live
(User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 04:04:33 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| bRILLIANT, I LOVE IT! |
|
|
Re: Clowns of Confusion live
(User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 05:47:30 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
well that was different, I really liked it :)
pixie xx |
|
|
Re: Clowns of Confusion live
(User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 02:36:18 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Secretwind, this reminded me of the Bring in the Clowns.......Life is so confusion at times, and your'e so right can be completely futile!
This was a very different poem, and showed much planning on your part. Carefully chosen words, that tore me apart!
Hugs
consue |
|
|
Re: Clowns of Confusion live
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 08:45:03 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
One hardly knows how to react to this one.
but we still live and as long as there's breathe there's hope.
Keep the faith luv.
Life's like a box of chocalet, one never knows wat cha gonna get.
Forrest gump says his momma says that but I luv it no matter who said it as it's magical and lets one find hope for the new day.
Great writing but like mom, (lovingcritters )said it rips my heart out.
luv, huggs, faith, hope, joy, peace,
emy
mucho luv! |
|
|
Re: Clowns of Confusion live
(User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on
Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 01:15:33 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| hehehe! clowns! that was very cool. I love your stuff. |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
