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Bunker Of Solitude
Contributed by
thereturnofx7
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Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 10:32:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Hide within my bunker
Behind this pallid concrete wall
To shield myself from the bullets
That haunt me worse than memories
The maddening pounding of shots fired
Thousands of insults trying to breech
This tattered barrier I constructed
Hoping to stay out the way
Wanting to stay here in my dream world
A place where I don't suffer as I do here
But knowing that this one safe place I hide
Will soon be filled full of my lonely tears
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thereturnofx7
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2004-08-31 22:32:26]
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Re: Bunker Of Solitude
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by MoonlitAngel on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 10:36:58 PM AEST
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I SO know exactly how you feel. More and more I just want to curl up and hide from the world in my own secret little place in my mind. Too bad life never wants to let me. *hugs*,
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Re: Bunker Of Solitude
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by pyrofairyburning on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 10:50:44 PM AEST
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| I like it. Alot of people can relate. I can. |
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Re: Bunker Of Solitude
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by RavenShadows on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 12:42:58 AM AEST
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| very nice....well wrote....easy to relate to... |
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